Long ago we fought
we fought each other
we fought everybody else
long ago you needed me
you missed me
ached to be close to me
thought I was beautiful
inside and out
long ago, we were in love
so long ago
these days.....
I wander transparent
hoping you will glance my way
ignite my colours
save me from drought
instead I am shelf bound and
dusty waiting to be
noticed explored and adored
waiting for you......
then my mind becomes clear
ephinany......
I see while i'm waiting
on you to love me
I am losing
I am forgetting to love
adore and honor myself
I am forgetting I am enough
I cannot expect the job
I must do, to be performed by you
if you do love me, you'll come back
and if you don't, i'll be ok
because I am enough
I was....I am....I will be
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I like this a lot, and can completely relate :)
Hey pall.
Really touching.....
Let the rain of love soon come down on you with a heavenly touch and make you fell the lovers delight...
Wow. This was beautiful.
Omg.. Its been so long since I checked this blog.. I don't write poetries anymore.. I don't think I have it in me anymore.. :) Thank you for such lovely comments thou :)
u remind me of me from very long time ago. i had this ability to spell things out the way you just did :)
i wish it never dries out!
word ver: belessed :)
Good one :)
Nice collection of words in a wonderful direction and meaning :)
Lucky fellow since you love hime so much. Will be come unlucky if wont return it back. I can find passion in your words.
very touching and very very wonderful!
read it thrice :)
p.s. how r u?
this was So.. inexplicably sadly beautiful. and it reminded me of one of my posts, 'numb reverie'.
http://mzahoor.blogspot.com/2010/01/numb-reverie.html
I am enough - I love this thought! :)I want to wake up with this thought eveyday and I bet my days would be much happier :)
Palwasha your poem was really very touching and sounded somewhat similar to my experience. The best way to get out of this is to focus on your own happiness and get ready for a better future.
Loved your post. Inspires me to follow your blog religiously :)
Hope to see you in my blog too-
http://romeo-das.blogspot.com/2010/03/stopped-raising-questions.html
this is not a comment on a specific post, but FUCK u are talented. loves it <3
I loved this poem. It's really relateable. But sad :/
Stay true to yourself and stay positive (if the poem is about you).
Wonderful poem!
if you do love me, you'll come back
and if you don't, i'll be ok
because I am enough
I was....I am....I will be
first time here,I think you have a nice set of poems.
Will read some more.
beautiful!
what a nice piece of poetry darling..thanks for joining my blog..give it a read if u like !!
That is a nice piece of writing. I like the poem.
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This is lovely.
First time @ your space.....but I am touched....by the powerful admiration of love & the preserved self-respect......esp the last lines....If u don't, i'll be ok because I am enoug. I was..I am..I will be!
Kudos Palwasha! Keep Smiling
oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,
the days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .
I am scared
I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .
maybe I've loss
A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be
You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk
two fools ,with a smile
Let go
rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "
wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You
My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave
was no one that was there to Listen
Was always there ,to fix me
Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth
there was many that was there to Judge
As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing
as must seemed things I done ,was heartless
dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew
Very nice.
Loved it. <3
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